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Amateur club

Name: Talal Muhammad Mansour / Lebanon.
Membership number: 103.
Age: 17 years
Occupation: High school student
Equipment: 1 - Canon AE

⏺ friend Talal
Your vision is very good and you seek an aesthetic shot.
The frame is good, as well as the angle of capture, but you need a slight improvement on them, with our congratulations and forward ⏹


Name: Simon Al-Baini / Beirut.
Membership number: 33.
Age: 24 years
Profession: student
Equipment: (Canon AE1) with a set of lenses and filters and a laboratory room for black and white.

⏺Friend Simon
I am still in the process of trying to get to filming the shot and the speed and comprehension it requires, and this is a necessary stage, but after that you have to touch on other technical issues.
Anyway, your technical ability is good, and the acidification process is okay⏹


Name: Anwar Ali Hubail / Ras Rumman - Bahrain Membership No.: 104
Age: 20 years
Profession is a student
Equipment: Nikon F3 with long and medium range lenses.

⏺ friend Anwar
The subject of children is full and rich in shots, and what you need is to focus on the frame and choose the appropriate backgrounds so that the shot is not lost in the background of the scene, especially since the picture of this child is very beautiful, and it would be wonderful if the face was only within the frame, then we would get innocent childhood expressions.
You have to choose your topics petro and then find out what you want, and then it is the turn of the close button ⏹


Name: Muhammad Khair Bakir / Damascus, Yabroud - Syria Membership No.: 105
Age: 20 years
Profession is a student
Equipment: Zenith camera (TTL).

⏺ Friend Muhammad Khair
Your photos contain a clear attempt towards forming a distinctive photographic line.. This attempt seems clear with the pictures of the flower and the cat. The idea is fine, as well as the angle of capture. As for the remaining photos, there is an apparent weakness in terms of color and frame.
Please study your photos with their angles more carefully and pay close attention to the colors in particular⏹


Name: Rami Sukkary / Tripoli - Lebanon.
Membership number: 106
Age: 21 years
Profession: student.
Equipment: Zenit TTL »

⏺ friend Ramy
The creation of a frame for the scene with an artistic vision is what is required so that we delete from its foreground the distortions that limit the ability of vision to access all parts of the image.
And this is what happened to you, so the angle of the frame is okay and the extension from the bottom to the depth of the scene is good, but the left side and the overlapping of tree branches led to a kind of distortion..
Then, before taking the picture, you must search carefully to reach a vision without impurities ⏹


Name: Muhammad Al-Masri / Beirut
Membership number: 107
Age: 15 years.
Profession: student
Equipment: Agfa Star

⏺ friend Muhammad
There is nothing wrong with the result, given your technical capabilities, although you have ideas, you have to develop them to reach an advanced stage, and we are all confident that you will progress and give a better production⏹


Name: Muhammad Kamal Nashid / Aleppo
Membership number: 108
Age: 37 years
Occupation: Member of the Aleppo Ordinary Association
Equipment: Minolta XG2 » with three lenses and filters.

⏺ friend Muhammad
It has a good technical outlook in addition to all technical operations as well.
It remains for you to focus on the subject more to get a clearer effect of the scene, and to know the important parts of it that should be highlighted more than others⏹