نادي الهواة .. مجلة فن التصوير اللبنانية _ ع٢٩

Amateur club

Name: Hussein Ali Ataya - South Lebanon
Membership number: 135
Age: 23 years
Occupation: employee.
Equipment: Decorated (EM) with a home black and white photocopy room.

⏺ Al-Siddiq Hussain - Antiquities are among the most attractive topics if we take time to capture them.. By searching for other angles of antiquities, we will find many, many wonderful photos. The pictures are okay, but it appears that your capabilities are capable of developing and giving what is better than this result⏹


Name: Youssef Youssef Al-Khalili / Abu Dhabi
Membership number: 136.
Age: 16 years old
Profession: student.
Equipment: Kodak camera

⏺ friend Youssef
- There is nothing wrong with the result from a technical point of view, but the artistic vision that you can develop remains, and it was lacking in the desert scene - this beautiful scene, if we look closely behind and around us, we will get a lot of shots.
As for the barbed tape, you could have taken a picture of it alone with the shadow on the sand.
For its part, the terrain is suitable for more than a wonderful scene, even the plants in the desert constitute a wonderful topic. Try to think and search more, especially that you have the ability to develop yourself⏹


My name is Ismail Bahadur Juma - Dubai - UAE
Membership number: 137.
Age: 21 years
Profession: soldier
Equipment: Konika camera.

⏺ friend Ismail
You have good attempts to go deep and get distinctive effects. The problem remains in the distribution of the scene within the frame, for example: with the picture of the two palm trees, you had to move a little to the right to delete the building on the far right and confine your frame between the two palm trees and the building in the middle.
Arranging the frame means deleting everything that distances the eye from the strong focus of the image, such as obstructions such as extraneous buildings or electricity poles, as it appears in the second shot, and from the third shot, it was possible to limit the frame to the boat’s logo and delete the rope⏹

Name: Saleh Massad / Jordan
Membership number: 138.
Age: 25 years
Occupation: Color laboratory technician
Equipment: Camera (1 - Canon A).

⏺ the friend is good
- It's okay with the result, you have to work on studying the scene before capturing so that your frame is thoughtful and distributed in a consistent manner.
Make sure your camera stays in a straight line, vertically or horizontally


Name: Muhammad Noman Muhammad - Najran - Saudi Arabia. Membership number 139.
Age: 22 years
Occupation: employee.
Equipment: Canon T70 camera.

⏺ friend Muhammad.
- Your photos are very beautiful, and if you took into account some of the rules of capture, they would be really excellent
1 - Image - the scene is good and can be considered complete
2- In the image of the building with the mountain, you had to work on changing the angle of capture and deleting part of the foreground .. in favor of the strength of the details.
3 - In the picture of the last scene - this wonderful scene - it was supposed to delete the foreground that led to the distortion and delete the small house on the far left .. You must adhere to the order of the frame before releasing the capture button ⏹


Name: Salem Saeed Omar Brik / Jeddah - Saudi Arabia. Membership number: 140
Age: 25 years
Occupation: employee - National Commercial Bank
Equipment: Camera (1 - Canon AE)

⏺ the friend is safe
The night picture is good, and this indicates your ability to control the long exposure.
The picture of the birds lost the power of viewing - the focus of the frame - due to the presence of the fourth bird on the right, where the balance was lost, bearing in mind that photographing such subjects requires us to make their number as single as possible.
The flower image was weak and out of focus - out of focus.
The last photo..has no photographic significance..you have to focus on meaningful subjects or artistic and expressive shots⏹


Name: Muhammad Nabil Al-Sharif / Kuwait
Membership number: 141
Age: 13 years.
Profession: student
Equipment: Camera (Pentax-MG)

⏺ friend Muhammad
- There is nothing wrong with your photo, but you have to think constantly before taking it to know the purpose of the photo and the purpose that you are aiming for.
The aesthetic aspect of the image is missing, and you had to choose, for example, an eye that is distinguished by prominent colors. In addition to that, you have to adopt the largest lens aperture, 16 or 22, to ensure a clearer focus.


Name: Issa Yousef Al-Watani / Bahrain.
Membership number: 142.
Age: 35 years
Occupation: employee at the Ministry of Health
Equipment: Konika camera.

⏺ Friend Issa
The snapshot is successful.. full of clear vision and a smooth feeling, especially the warm colors spilled over the scene, with congratulations and to more of these distinguished works⏹