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Amateur club

Name: Riyad Ibrahim / Homs - Syria
Membership number: 245
Age: 40 years.
Profession: employee
Equipment: several cameras and a black-and-white endorsement room

- Friend Riyad:
Your photos are good and you don't need any comments, especially since you have an artistic sense that qualifies you to give more distinguished works⏹

Name: Obaid Dahi Al-Rumaithi / Abu Dhabi - United Arab Emirates.
Membership number: 246.
Age: 22 years.
Occupation: employee of the Water and Electricity Department
Equipment: Canon-T70 camera.

- Friend Obaid:
You have a good ability to give, and the balance of your pictures is acceptable, but you have to find topics that suit your ability⏹

Name: Tayseer Al-Jasser Al-Saho / Aleppo - Syria
Membership number: 247
Age: 27 years.
Occupation: Broadcaster
Equipment: Camera (Praktica- B100)

Buddy Tayseer:
Nothing wrong with what you applied. There are notes that you should pay attention to:
Stay away from the center line, so that your pictures do not come divided by this line, and this is what happened to the scene of the Euphrates River, so the scene turned out to be static.
As for the Deir Ezzor Bridge, its composition is weak and static, and you, my friend, have to pay attention to the light path, and the shadows that result from it. You must either exploit them or exclude them, and this is what happened to the Aleppo Citadel cat. If it were not for these ill-conceived shadows, we would have obtained a good shot.
The flower shot is OK.
In general, your photos are acceptable⏹

Name: Johnny Madour / Damascus - Syria.
Membership number: 249.
Age: 18 years
Occupation: Photographer at Taurus Laboratories
Equipment: 1 camera (Canon AE).

Friend Johnny:
Your works are good and you are distinguished by the vision of setting the framework and limiting the topic appropriately.
Greetings and to the further progress ⏹

Name: Ayman Subhi Issa / Damascus
Membership number: 250
Age: 20 years.
Occupation: An employee at the Atomic Energy Authority
Equipment: camera (Yashica)

Ayman's friend:
It's okay in terms of techniques and capture processes, the issue of the frame still needs to be studied more, especially since the frame of your photos is not straight and this requires holding the camera straight⏹

Name: Hammam Magni / Jericho - Syria
Membership number: 251.
Age: 28 years
Profession: engineer.
Equipment: (Zenith-EM) camera with black and white lab

- Friend Hammam:
It seems that you have made good use of your specialization as an engineer, which made you able to simply choose your topics and translate them through engineering technology, which allowed you to choose the appropriate angle and good composition of the content.
Overall, your photos are successful and good⏹

Name: Ali Ahmed Hussein / South Lebanon
Membership number: 252.
Age: 23 years.
Profession: accountant
Equipment: (Mamiya-ZM) camera.

Ali's friend:
The scenery of the rocks is okay, but your remaining pictures lack the clarity of the idea and its translation through composing and balancing the scene, especially by removing the columns and lines that distort the vision⏹

Name: Muhammad Khair Bakir / Damascus - Syria.
Membership number: 105 -
Issue 25 Age: 20 years
Occupation: employee.
Equipment: Camera (Zenith-TTL)

- Friend Muhammad:
There is nothing wrong with a scene - sunflowers, as it came in nice and attractive colors. As for the child’s snapshot, don’t you see with us that it is weak and incomplete, especially in terms of deleting parts of the child? It would have been better to include it with the snapshot⏹

Name: Samer Al-Sidawi / Damascus - Syria
Membership number: 102 - Issue 24
Age: 20 years.
Occupation: Student at the Faculty of Science
Equipment: Zenith camera.

- Friend Samer:
Clear and tangible progress, especially in the field of authorship and capture operations.
Congratulations and we wish you further progress⏹