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Name: Saleh Al-Abdullah Al-Sharekh / Riyadh - Kingdom of Saudi Arabia
Membership number: 217
Age: 25 years.
Profession: Architectural painter.
Equipment: camera (Mamiya)

⏺ the friend is good
In general, your photos are good. A note remains about the tree scene. And it was preferable to take the frame in a coherent manner, as happened with the tower scene, which was balanced, so you had to deviate slightly to the left for the formation to come out strong⏹

Name: Abdel Salam Younis / Beirut - Lebanon
Membership number: 218
Age: 17 years
Profession is a student
Equipment: Camera (1 - Canon AE)

⏺ friend Abdul Salam
It is clear that you are good at using the instrument, but this is not important. Rather, you have to search for aesthetic issues with a keen eye, and not release the shutter button for everything you see, knowing that the scene, the Eiffel Tower, was balanced in terms of composition, and had it not been for the front of the car, the scene would have been acceptable. As for the other shots It does not express any aesthetic or artistic condition, or even a technique, except for a shot, the helmet »with which the filter was used⏹

Name: Abbas Ghuloom Hussein Al-Saleh / Safat - Kuwait
Membership number: 219
Age: 29 years
Profession: accountant.
Equipment: 1 Canon A camera and another Nikon FG camera.

⏺ friend Abbas
You try to find the appropriate topics for photography, and this may take a long time unless your eyes get used to watching clearly, and this requires you to read the artistic educational topics that we supply from time to time, about the viewing process, the look, and the frame. You publish, this also denies the ability of photographic vision ⏹

Name: Imad Eddin Samour / Damascus - Syria.
Membership number: 220
Age: 21 years
Profession: manufacturing Arabic and French sweets. Equipment: camera (Aglamatic) and another (11-Zenith)

⏺ friend Emad
There is nothing wrong in terms of using the camera, but the basis remains, which is the artistic view and the choice of capture angles.
With the picture of the little girl, it was supposed to remove all the background obstacles that affect the final look of the picture, and with the scene of the effects, the depth of the scene was blurred, especially with regard to the house on the left of the picture, as it was supposed to be removed, and therefore you had to limit your subject by getting closer to it and forming a coherent frame, as for the other pictures There is no problem with it⏹

Name: Bakri Ibrahim Totonji, Raqqa - Syria
Membership number: 221
Age: 18 years old -
Occupation: camera equipment employee (11 - Zenith)

⏺ friend Bakri
Children's photos are okay, although it is supposed to adopt a clear background with a picture of the girl.
The picture of the rose is also okay, as for the dove shot, it was supposed to be taken in the same style as the picture of the rose, i.e. by adopting a large aperture, in order to obtain a blurred background - blurred - to obtain a more accurate focus of vision ⏹

Name: Muhammad Ziyad Qorbi / Damascus - Syria
Membership number: 222
Age: 48 years
Occupation: Dealer of printing materials and xenograph
Equipment - (1 - canon-AF) camera with .200m zoom lenses (m-80 mm, macro and normal)

⏺ friend Muhammad
With portrait photos, it is preferable to hold the camera lengthwise rather than wide, in order to obtain a full frame for portrait photos. Side spaces are not necessary here, while we find the upper space - that is, the side of the head - omitted. The image of actress Laila Elwi on the TV screen is good, and I congratulate you on her. The scene of the mosque is characterized by acceptable balance.
As for the Lattakia beach scene, you had to study it before shooting to find the required balance between the tree trunks and the middle of the subject, and therefore the artistic formation of this image is missing⏹

Name: Muhammad Abu Bakr Al-Dalio / Sebha - Libyan Jamahiriya
Membership number: 223
Age 24 years
Occupation: Medical Laboratory Technology Engineer
Equipment: a Pentax-MG camera and another Yashica camera.

⏺ friend Muhammad
You have a good artistic vision, in addition to your technical vision in terms of capture angles and limitation of the frame. Greetings and appreciation for your work⏹